I think that what you composed was very reasonable.
However, think on this, suppose you were to write a awesome headline?
I am not suggesting your content isn't solid, however suppose you
added something that makes people want more? I mean horse2014-1 | My Model Horses is kinda plain. You could glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they write news headlines to get
viewers to click. You might try adding a video
or a pic or two to get readers excited about everything've got to
say. Just my opinion, it would bring your website
a little bit more interesting.